Monday, August 08, 2005

I've been forgetting to cross post from my other journal here.

Not a whole lot going on. Aside from a rant about tampons and some snatches (pun intended) of poetry and a story that's been flittering around my head I've been laying low.

I'm still toying with the idea of doing a poetry chapbook. Despite my own distaste for my poetry it still gets read. I've been working on some more. The best part about the poetry is really just the emptying out of my skull. And the idea of doing some spoken word of some sort.

If I had a mic I'd do some and maybe mix it, put it to a little music. That's something to keep in mind I suppose.

I need to fix this line-

"His come spurts at the same instant does his viscera."

Should it be- his viscera does? Or should I leave it alone.

Gods I'm a bad editor.

Probably why I rarely get my submissions (the few I've been making lately) out in any orderly fashion. I'm done. I want tea.
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1 comment:

Crazy Bike Guy said...

As far as correct grammar, having "does" at the end is the mostly correct way to go. Artistic license allows you to rearrange things for effect, though, and I rather like the effect achieved using your original wording.

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